Pretty Crazy

These are very nice. Some of them, like the flowers, could be a little more exciting. I'm not sure how to make a flower exciting. Perhaps it's the angle. But ...

Hey this is pretty neat. It's short, yeah, but the structure is good. I like the quirkiness of it. It could almost be a song, you know? Good work. Love ...

Okay, first I would like to say something that's really important to getting people to read this whole thing. Layout. You need to make it easy-looking to read. Otherwise people ...

These are really good! I especially like the one on the airplane looking over the wing and at the clouds. They're all good, really. With a professional feel to them ...

*Like* it! Pixel art is practically an art in itself, so I admire you for however you did this. Kinda reminds me of the old game boy video games. Just ...

Nice pics! They're all of nature, and good glimpses of it too. The first ones, of the leaves in the water, is quite nice. They have a very fall feel ...

Hello, I haven't read the previous chapters, but I liked this just as well. You did a good job showing each of their feelings and emotions. The exorcist Dad is ...

Okay, that's a short story. Wow, I'm amazed at how much you could squeeze in there! The emotion, the setting, and then the tragedy. Seriously, good job. Is there going ...

Good day, I agree with seeminglymeanless, this is a terrifyingly large post! Really, it would be so much better if you posted the parts separately. Now, I only got to ...

Hey fellow dragon lover! Alright, first of all it was a bit confusing. I'm still not quite sure what's going on, or rather, why this is happening. Could you work ...

I love the urgency of this. Like when the father tells her to run. It is a little bit sightly cliche, however. I have read books before where the parents ...

Okay, I'm dying to know more. You started this story in such an un-cliche way that I couldn't get enough. Your descriptions were pretty much perfect, and not at all ...

Lol I loved it! I usually don't review poetry, but you got my attention. I had to say something. :3 Awesome work! ~Crazy

My goodness you're fast! Here's something for ya. :3 Many thanks.

It was sweet but a little pointless. The first chapter should intrigue the reader, that doesn't necessarily mean starting off with a car chase or whatever. The point is, let ...